After giving the presentation, our teacher gave us our feedback. We had a light system: green light meant we were good to go, amber light meant it is almost ready but a few changes need to be made and red light meant there were a lot of problems that needed fixing. Our group received a green light with certain conditions which was pleasing. From our feedback session this is what we gathered:
What we did
well
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What we need
to improve on
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Excellent research on target and secondary
audience.
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Excellent research on institutions.
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Solid research on representation of social groups
and characters.
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Good analysis on how we want to attract TA
through opening sequence.
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Good use of film making techniques and
technologies.
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Improve intro
conversation between doctor and dad so not too much is revealed and there is
a loss of enigma.
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Develop how
we want to represent the setting.
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Include more
characters on film as a whole. (false villains etc)
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Think about
music more and how we intend to use it.
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